Saturday, January 16, 2010

Script

The basic initial script was written as followed:

Jodie is sitting on a bench, drinking her sorrows away on a graveyard bench as a male turns up called Ryan.

Jodie: (smiling and drunk) Hey there sexy
Ryan: (breaks into a smile and is pleased with himself) Well hello

The pair get closer as they lean against a tree with Ryan in front kissing her neck. She then panics as he begins to hurt her, she looks very scared and tries to struggle.

Jodie: (Spoken then shouted) NO, no leave me alone
Ryan: (Pulls Jodie closer) Come on baby
Jodie: (Struggles more and tries to pull away) No

She finally hots breaking point and scratches Ryan across the face in order to run away from the male

Ryan: (Yells while holding face) You bitch

Jodie runs off and is scared and frightened so she takes a short cut to get home. In the alleyway Ryan stands waiting for her.

Ryan: (almost a growl of anger) No one gets away from me

He grabs her and pushes the female right against the wall, forcing her to stay there yet Jodie is struggling.

Jodie: (Struggling and frightened) Leave me alone

At the fear of being raped the females alter ego comes and grabs Ryan by the back of her neck as smashes her head against the metal railings, killing him. She then turns back to herself and cries as she stares at the body before backing against the wall and running away after screaming no a few times.

Cuts to the next day as Jodie walks into college with the same clothes on, she looks dirty and rough so walks into the toilet where she finds her best mate Chantelle.

Chantelle: (looking shocked) Jesus your look rough
Jodie: (still frightened) yeah thanks for that
Chantelle: (frowns but carries on talking) oh my god, Jason is so sweet, he took me out last night for a meal and then we went back to his and let me just tell you it was the most amazing sex ever
Jodie: (Angry and scared) Shut up, shut up, its always about you isn't it?
Chantelle: (mocking and annoyed) What the hell is wrong with you? Just causer you cant get no one, what happened to that boy Ryan you liked?
Jodie: (Getting really angry) I said shut up didn't i?
Chantelle: (Shocked and angry) What the .....
Jodie: (Hits breaking point (Shut up)

Jodie flickers into her alter ego as she stares at Chantelle before she grabs her by the hair as she smashes her face against the mirror causing a large cut on her face. She then keeps hold og her hair and takes into a cubicle of the loo. There is a lot of screaming and banging in the loo from Chantelle although the ego says nothing. When the alter ego leaves the room you see Chantelle lying on the floor dead with blood on the walls. It then changes back to Jodie who sees the body.

Jodie: (Crying hysterically) No, No please no. Chantelle I'm sorry, please i am so sorry

She then gets up and stumbles over to the mirror as there is blood on her hands. In disgust and terror she turns the tap on in order to wash the blood away. She scrubs it off before looking into the mirror.

Jodie: (Crying in distress and shouting) Please no why me?

Her alter ego appears in the mirror and smiles back at Jodie who backs away and screams.

1 comment:

  1. A detailed script with consideration of some stage direction.

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